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- My honest poem - PoemZone Poetry Forum
Hey guys, my writing teacher is having me write an honest poem Could you help me fix it or switch stanzas around? Thanks so much! I was born on October 24,
- Beauty - PoemZone Poetry Forum
A true beauty this poem is! I like the subtle rhyme between "thousand" and "surrounded" in the first 4 lines, that do not have rhyming ends When rhymes arrive a little later (bliss-miss, sight-plight-might) it works very well, like a breath of fresh air Thank you for sharing!
- negligence. - PoemZone Poetry Forum
negligence a couple hundred years ago, killing one was abnormality now, people are attacking, starting wars without mutuality innocent children are dying,
- Her heros locks - PoemZone Poetry Forum
Since then, several Zoners have been having a great old time turning out witty, usually rhyming pieces in this form This poem is not a quadrisept, just sticks to four-syllable lines It is actually based on the story of Samson and Delilah, giving a somewhat different slant to the account in the book of Judges
- satans mate - PoemZone Poetry Forum
You paint a detailed picture here, spiteful and gloomy, in a very compelling form, showing of great rhyming skills bouncing up and down the rythmic flow of a ranting old man My mind's intrigued, my ears are pleased and I'm impressed (bordering soon-to-be-addicted) I will have to read this again
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